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Review:TNT says:
Hi I am here for the review swap :-)
So, I am going through this step by step, but totally unsorted, just how it popped up in my mind:
First, this is awesome, I love how you draw a vivid picture, your overall story telling is really well and thatís one of the most important things about any written story.
One thing I noticed, try focusing a bit on formatting. Too long paragraphs are hard to read and make some people loose interest. It is just as important as correct punctuation (though I donít see any problems here)
Other than that, I have nothing but praise for you. This was an amazing first chapter, an amazing point of view. There can never be too much descriptions in my opinion and you rock at it.
I liked how you established your characters. We didnít see many, but you already set a direction for Malfoy with only a few glances and they all feel very real.
I donít know what else to say. Great first chapter, great OC so far, now excuse me as I go read more

Love, T.

Author's Response: Hi!

Aw thank you very much for such a lovely review :) I have tried to break up my future chapters and I will definitely keep that in mind!
Dear Malfoy's quite important in a while so watch out for him ;) haha I really do hope you enjoy the rest!

thank you so much! :)

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