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Review:toomanycurls says:
Hi!! Doing our review swap!

The way this opened gave me the sense of a nice time of relaxation after not being able to relax for quite a while. You did a great job conveying how Imogen felt after a long sleep with less fear and terror in her life.

You worked in her self-description cleverly. It flowed well with the action in the story.

I really liked how her mind drifted from her present relaxation to more difficult thoughts. The symbolism behind the hot shower burning her skin and remembering the scary events going on around her was really well done.

The ending with Draco's demand that they find the grail made me question his intentions and loyalty. I can see she's supposed to trust him but I'm not sure he's entirely trustworthy. The set up you made for the start of their adventure was really good.

Great chapter!

Author's Response: Hi! I can always count on your for a lovely and uplifting review!

thank you so much! I'm very glad that you like the opening and ending of the chapter (and hopefully most things in between). I will admit, it was rather nice to write a more relaxing starting to a chapter and take a break from all that torture bish bash haha.

I'll get to your review straight away! :)


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