Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:theblacksisters says:
I liked the story, but it needs a lot more. Like what happens? Do the Death Eaters find them? (I hope so. I like sad endings where everyone dies) I don't know, write a one-shot sequel. It doesn't seem like the story is finished.

Author's Response: To be honest, I wrote this several months ago and I think my writing style has improved significantly since then, especially in terms of detail and imagery and tying up loose plot ends. I also wrote this story for a challenge, so I think I rushed it a bit more than I normally would. However, I sort of meant to leave the end open for the reader to fill in on their own. I guess you'll have to decide for yourself whether the Death Eaters find them or not.

I'm sorry you weren't a fan of the ending, but I'm glad you liked the rest of the story. Thanks again for the kind reviews.

-Amanda


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 206
Submit Report: