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Review:ohmymerlin says:
Hello again! Long time no see! I finally have a bit of free time to review this chapter!

This chapter was brilliant! I absolutely loved the way you wrote Narcissa, you had some really quotable quotes from her and if this was a published novel you'd have gifsets with that quote. My favourite in particular was this one:

"Knowledge is the source of all power, Rose. To chase down truth is to chase down wisdom."

I absolutely ADORED that line. It aligns very well with canon Narcissa and it just shows that she's not just a silly female but a very clever witch who ultimately brought down the demise of Voldemort!

However, I noticed a few typos throughout the chapter. (Although, I will warn that I was being extremely nit-picky today so please don't think I'm a horrible person! D:)

"I think it's time we pay a visit to your family. You just forgot the end quote on here :)

Wasn't it better to just be in the Auror Department where he can keep an eye on her? I think the 'can' should be 'could', just to continue with the past tense :)

Rose always felt like an outside whenever she visited Malfoy Manor. You've just forgotten the letter 'r' on outsider :p

It was N as if she had rehearsed her answers as Rose had rehearsed her questions. There's a cheeky 'N' poking out there. :p

His dad had threw a fit, I think it should be 'thrown' a fit instead :)

It's nothing a quick reread won't fix, I was just being annoying and picky.

But everything else was fantastic! I love how you've written Harry, Ron, Draco, Narcissa (as I said before) and I love Scorpius! He's just so sweet!

I also liked that you made Rose nervous walking into Malfoy Manor, showing that although the war is long gone (or is it? I have some interesting theories I'm not willing to share because I can't vocalise them properly, haha!) and she didn't even participate in it, it still affects people. (Please excuse me, I've spent the past few weeks labouring over an essay that talks about the impacts of war upon people. I can't help myself anymore! :p)

I also loved Danny's interrogation! I did want to smack Smith across the face though. I can't believe how unwilling he was to listen to Danny! BELIEVE HIM, YOU OLD FOOL.

I also loved Danny's hypothesis with Al, I like seeing their bromance. :)

Oh! And I also really love Lucy! Even though she hasn't really been a major character so far, I really love her! I don't know why but I do like it whenever she pops up! :p

And the quote, "We need to rally everyone together" reminded me of High School Musical and I just had a vision of Al and Danny spontaneously bursting into 'We're All in This Together" with the dance moves and everything, hahaha!

Anyway, getting back on track. I liked that you made Danny seem like a bit of a loser when he was getting interrogated by Smith because really? How do you explain a magic boarding school to Muggles? :p

Anywho, this was another amazing chapter and I have more free time to finally catch up!

- Kayla :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for sticking with me! Life and school has been so busy, but thank you so much! I will definitely go back and edit those nit-picky things. THanks for pointing them out! I'm glad that you liked Narcissa. She was always a character that intrigued me, and I liked that she wasn't this stupid female that followed along to whatever her husband said. Lucius looked to her for guidance at times.

AL AND DANNY'S BROMANCE IS MY FAVORITE PART ABOUT WRITING! Lucy is going to have a much bigger role in the forthcoming chapters, so look out for her! (:

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!(:


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