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Review:shez says:
Oh man! This is a really sad piece. I really hope we get a follow-up chapter (right? right? this isn't the end, right?)

I definitely think there is an element of vulnerability about Leah that makes her a VERY relatable character with just about anyone who's ever been bullied in school, or harassed. And the fact you give her an embarrassing stutter really heightens this feeling. Her pain, anguish, really comes across and and well, it REALLY tugged at my heartstrings (I'm a pretty heartless person btw). I want to give the girl a hug and pull her out of that hostile environment! The way you describe her thoughts really touch on her age and mindset so bravo!

GRRR, I really hate Seamus right now!

There were a couple grammatical and spacing issues but pretty minor. Not a big deal.

In the future, I really hope Leah develops some self-confidence and learns to embrace her stutter. She's very hard on herself right now (again, VERY relatable) and teaches Seamus and those mean girls a lesson! Thanks for requesting!

Keep writing, friend! Happy days!

Author's Response: Hi, thanks for the really great review, you're to kind! It was nice to wake up to this :)

Haha, well I do have something in my head that if I was to continue this I could, but I don't know if I should!

Anyway I'm pleased at the reception Leah's got so far, and that she seems to be relatable. I enjoyed writing her, not everyone can be perfect! not even in the wizarding world!

Thanks for the review!

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