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Review:Cannons says:
Here from the review tag so HI! :)

I picked this to read because I saw it had won a challenge so I just had to come and read it. Luna is one of my favourite characters and I think you did an amazing job in writing her. You didn't make her over the top at all, or like weird in a way that isn't Luna. The way you've written her is just exactly as I imagine Luna. So calm in every situation, doesn't care what others think.

People just don't understand that she really is quite smart, (I mean she is in Ravenclaw) and very perceptive which you show brilliantly.

You've done a great job btw with the contrast in characters, and still showing that you can be weird in a different way. That was clever.

Does Mortimer have OCD? haha because he was way to organised. It's brilliant that he's trying so hard not to be weird, that he just makes himself weird.

My favourite bit was when Luna forgot the umbrella, typical Luna.

I really enjoyed this, you've done Luna justice I think. Maybe start 'the adventures of Mortimer' ? ;)

Author's Response: Hello there! Luna is one of my favourite characters too, so I was super afraid to write her, haha! I'm so glad to hear that she's just how you imagined Luna to be - thank you so much!

I agree, I think Luna is very perceptive, albeit a bit detached. (Even if she does things like leave her umbrella behind :p ) It was a really weird combination to write actually, trying to convey Luna's thoughts but have it still be clear what is going on outside her head!

There are definitely lots of ways to be weird - in Mortimer's case, weird by trying not to be weird. Haha, he is a little OCD isn't he?

I'm so thrilled to hear that I've done Luna justice - thank you so much! As for the Adventures of Mortimer Vespasian-Marlowe... well, I think it'd be a lot of opera, cheese tastings, and organisation of file drawers!

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing ♥

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