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Review:MissMdsty says:
Hey there!

This was such an emotional story. It moved me and it touched me and it was just too perfect for words.

The characterization was spot on, for both Luna, who being presented in canon is always challenging to write, while keeping her true to her nature, which makes her unique.

Ollivander gave off the exact same vibe he did when I read him in the books. The kind of man who is mysterious without trying, mostly because he knows so much about obscure things like wandlore.

I liked how you made a timeline for them, starting with their imprisonment at the Manor, and the fact that they grew close, since it was only implied in DH, when he sent her a new wand. The fact that Luna chose to have him at her wedding was really sweet and something that I think she would do. I also liked how you had her tell him about Rolf, because it was really refreshing to see that despite her general personality, our Luna grew up and fell in love.

The last part broke my heart into a million pieces. It was so heartwarming how she went to his bedside, and that was the last moment they saw each other. It made for a bittersweet ending. His thoughts on Luna, as being a "bright eyed creature" made me tear up. Those three words sum her up prefectly!

This was a lovely piece of writing and I am so happy to have come across it! Good job! :)

Ral

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