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Review:shez says:
So I really liked the conversation b/w James and the gang , as well as their distinct personalities! They really made the scene pop. Again, the theme of fearis magnificently juxtaposed with love, and the way you manage to balance the stark contrasrt iin mood really shows your skill as a writer. I have trouble finding this balance bw danger and humor you've managed to achieve. This chapter was bit fluffy for my liking but that's a personal preference. The writing is as solid as the last chapter ( w a few minor grammatical errors which I'm sure you'll catch going through it once). It's your characterizations that make the story shine :). Feel free to rerequest!

Author's Response: Hi Shez! Thank you do much for the awesome feedback. I'll go through and check out tthe grammar stuff I have. I didn't mean to make this too fluffy. It's certainly the softest part of the series. The next two parts are quite dark. It means a lot to hear that the characterizations stood out as a strength for you!!! I'll definitely put another request in!!

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