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Review:Cannons says:
Hi there! (again (; )

Ok this might get a bit weird/gushy so be warned..

So as I already mentioned, I've read this before and loved it.

I felt a bit intimidated though, because I think you posted it in the 'Unexpected Voice' challenge(asking if you could use it - I can't remember exactly), and I actually got given Mrytle. So I was wondering how I would compete with this!

Anyway as I was reading this I actually got really inspired and wanted to try and write something depressing, angsty, so I wrote 'Time Marches On' it's on my archive. So you inspired someone to write something! :D


The first eleven words really set the scene for the rest of it, and the rest lived up to it. I'd never read anything about Mrytle before on HPFF, so it was great. Perfectly depressing and sad, just like her.

Your description was great and my favourite bit was - ' But I cannot feel the physical pain that I so oddly long for. I want to feel human again. '

So yeah, I hope that wasn't to weird but I really did like it. :)

Author's Response: Hello again :) Good to have you back!

Haha, gush away! No complaints from my side :p
You have mentioned this to me, and I can't tell you how pleased I am! Every time I think of this story, and the reviews, whatever you have told me about it stands out. So thank you :)

Oh sorry :blush: I didn't mean to intimidate you, but I suppose it isn't a bad feeling? Knowing that I've written something that pushed someone to believe that it's good enough to be considered competition!

I've read that one and I absolutely loved it if you can tell from my review ;) I'm glad you got inspired through this! It's such a nice feeling!

Aww, thanks! I'm forever trying with descriptions, so this is nice to read :)

Thanks for this lovely review :)


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