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Review:Cannons says:
Hey there, here with your requested review!

So I actually found this two nights ago I think, I can't remember how, but yeah so I've read to chapter 4 I think so far, and I have it saved in my favourites. It kept me up quite late that night if I'm honest.

Quite simply I think the idea for this is brilliant. I've never come across anything like this so far. I've got to be honest, I was a little confused as to what was happening and why at first, but I soon got in to it.

I love Mr Walker, and personally I can't wait to find out more about him. I don't know if he's a main part of your story but I hope he is.

The court scene really surprised me when I first read it, because I wanted to know who would save her so willingly. He reminds me a bit of Umbridge.

I know it isn't in the first chapter, but her relationship with Albus is fascinating.

I'm really excited to finish reading from chapter 4 to the last one you've done and I think you've got a great idea. One thing, have you finished writing this or writing chapter by chapter?

great job anyway

Author's Response: Hey thanks for reviewing :)

I'm glad you like the premise--a lot of time and effort's gone into formulating it :). Mr. Walker isn't really a big important part--moreso he's there to ask questions and move th story along, but maybe I might decide to give him a first name or something later on haha. The Head reminds you of Umbridge---LOOL that's the funniest thing ever. Glad you like the Rose and Albus relationship---it's going to get weirder as it goes.

I wrote the first three chapter together but now I write them as I go. Hey, thanks for stopping by! Much appreciated!


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