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Review:shez says:
So I know you asked for a review for the first chapter but I went ahead and read three---I WANTED TO KNOW WHAT WOULD HAPPEN! Like seriously, the way the prologue was set up, all tense and dramatic and such...aaah lovely!


I was waiting for some nice big revelation like this. I like the way you've had slowly make her into the Weasleys. it's much more realistic, than if they discovered her on the streets. As far as OCs usually go, it's very difficult not to inadvertently fall into mary-sue land. However, your character --as much as I've seen of her so far --- seems a break from the mold. A rags to magic tale--I feel like reading Dickens now haha.

Not to mention all our canon characters seem very much in canon...even down to Fred and George haha. I especially love McGonagall.

Since you asked for such general feedback, I don't have much more to offer, really. Since it's AU, the story fits into the framework. It's Harry PPotter's Fourth-ish year? (correct me if I'm wrong). I'm not sure where the plot's going right now. Who this Sadie character, what's happened to her that's he can't talk, this mysterious aunt of Harry Potter--I hope it all plays a big role in the future. But you have a very solid start and if you keep doing what you're doing you'll be fine!

Happy days and feel free to rerequest!

Author's Response: The fact that you went ahead and read three because you needed to know what happened MAKES MY DAY!!! That is seriously the best compliment EVER! I want to just hug you. :D

And then I want to grovel at your feet and beg forgiveness for taking so incredibly long to reply to this review that made me so happy. I'm a music teacher and we do our annual musical theater production every year in Oct/Nov, so my life has been nonexistant for weeks now. I'm trying really hard to get caught back up though.

Yup. Sadie is Harry's cousin. I'm glad you like the revelation. I was worried people would want to throw rotten fruit at me or something for messing with canon in such a way, especially one so ripe for having Mary-Sue aspects.

You know, it never occured to me to have the Weasleys find her on the streets. Good thing you weren't wanting it to happen that way, because, yeah... Never even thought of that. LOL. And yes, I'm SO happy you don't think she's a Mary-Sue, at least so far.

Rags to riches al la Dickens - that is a very good description for this story. I like it.

And yes, this is set during Goblet of Fire right now. And I do plan on answering all those questions in the future, so hopefully the fact that you have so many means you are involved in the story and want to come back.

Promise to rerequest as soon as I can snag a spot. I would have done it earlier, but I didn't have your lovely response written yet.

Anyway, thank you so very much and I hope you come back, even though it's been a long time.

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