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Review:adluvshp says:
Hey! Here for review tag.

Another fun chapter to read xP I enjoyed the Quidditch match, you described it quite well, and Millie's catch was cool. I am enjoying the banter between Sirius and Millie though one tiny CC would be that I feel it's getting kind of redundant - like there's not much progress in their relationship as to how it was a couple chapters ago.

Of course, being your story I understand you might intend it this way, but the pace is just a little slow for my preference. Everyone has different opinions though so feel free to ignore me xP

I am curious as to how the double date will turn out and if anything ensues between Sirius/Millie. It's also nice that James/Lily are finally going on a date. It is an event that I look forward to =)

The chapter was well-written as always and I didn't spot any grammar issues. The flow was smooth and the characters as well as interactions make for a good read.

Good job,
Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hello, again!

Thank you for the CC! Their relationship stays in this rut for a REALLY long time, in my opinion, and this story moves quite slow, I think. Definitely needs a rewrite, soon!

Their date goes in an... Interesting direction. Hope to see you soon! Thanks for dropping by!


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