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Review:Cannons says:
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This was such a sad one shot. I loved how all of them were buried next to each other, and how you mentioned Sirius' grave was empty.

I think this it's such a Harry thing to do, to go by himself sneaking out almost. It's nice that something good happened to him on Halloween for once.

The bit about Teddy changing his appearance in the nursery was a nice touch as well.

The ending, the last three lines, were so sad you almost got me. ;) That's such a great thing to imagine them being able to hear him talk to them.

It was really good, I enjoyed it :D

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing.

I am pleased you liked how they were buried next to each other and the little detail about Sirius' grave being empty.

It's nice to know that you think it was very Harry-like to go by himself as I was afraid I was making him out-of-character.

I liked putting in the little detail about Teddy so I am happy you liked that too.

The ending was sad yeah, but I am glad it touched you.

Thank you!

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