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Review:adluvshp says:
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I really found this adorable! The way you explored a younger Molly, looking at her growing family, was awesome. I enjoyed the insight into her thoughts as she fondly looked at her sons. Her worries about putting on weight also seemed authentic as after all she is a young woman at this time. I loved how you made her happy about the next pregnancy though, and how she pushed aside the putting-on-weight issue.

I also liked the little details about Molly's brothers visiting them, and such. It made the story sound really homey and natural. The ending was also very sweet and it made me smile.

The entire piece flowed beautifully and your descriptions were lovely. I really enjoyed this outlook of Molly's life as it made for a refreshing read. Very cute!!

Great job!

Author's Response: Hi AD!

Thank you so much for the lovely review! I was going for adorable so I'm really glad that was your impression. ^_^ I'm thrilled that you liked her thoughts and struggles in this story (as well as her discovery that she's pregnant).

Adding Fabian and Gideon was a lot of fun. Looking at the dates of when Molly had kids, I had to imagine that her brothers would have frequented them.

Thank you so much for a lovely review. Your kind praise was really nice and made me quite happy. :D

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