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Review:marauderfan says:
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Awww, this was really cute! I thought it seemed appropriate that Harry went to visit their graves on Halloween - for Harry that's a day associated with loss, so it was nice he was able to reconnect (in a way) with them.

I like the details you added about the kids in the neighbourhood - small things like that do so much in setting a scene, and it set the tone of this as a more light-hearted Halloween from the beginning.

You wrote Harry really well! For your first time attempting to do so, it was great! This definitely seemed like something he would do, and didn't seem out of character.

Overall, lovely little one-shot :)

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you for reading and reviewing.

I am pleased you liked this, and you find Harry visiting the graves on Halloween appropriate.

I always like putting in little details like that so I am glad you liked them and they set the tone for you.

It's a huge relief to hear that you think I wrote Harry well. I was very afraid of writing him but I finally jumped the boat xP I am pleased you didn't find him out of character.


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