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Review:AlexFan says:
HOLY SKFHLSKFELJ WHAT!?

Sadie is Harry's sister!? She can't speak!? The plot twists are killing me! But, but, I need to process this, holy guacamole!

I had a feeling that this would have something to do with the Potter's though when I saw the banner for the story. I just didn't know how.

But wow, Harry has a cousin that he didn't even know existed and can't speak. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing how their relationship plays out and how they get to know each other. That's huge though, how is Harry going to deal with this? How is he going to get along with Sadie when he meets her? I bet you that they're going to be all awkward around each other and they won't say anything for a while (Sadie because she can't speak).

My favourite characters so far definitely the twins and Hermione but that's also got to do with the fact that they were the most in character out of everyone. I love how Hermione immediately started thinking of ways to help Sadie with her problem and where she could look to find a solution. It was such a Hermione thing to do that I couldn't help but smile when I read that part.

The twins banter though was great. I say this for just about any story that has Fred and George in it but it's true, the banter going on between those two is absolutely brilliant and lightens up the chapter despite the fact that a serious matter is being talked about.

And I like that there was some history on how Charlie got his name thrown in there too. It's not a very big thing but it was still nice to see.

Anyway, absolutely awesome chapter!
~Grace

Author's Response: Wow! I don't think I know that word. I'm not even sure how to respond... Kidding!

Thanks! This review gave me a huge grin! I'm SO excited that the plot twists were fun for you to find out, instead of "I can't believe she just DID that and ruined everything" kind of reactions.

So, yes, Sadie is Harry's cousin. And Sadie can't talk.

Would you like some chips to go with your guacamole? *hides*

Seriously, you like the twists though? I was so worried when I put this up that people would start throwing things at me right about this chapter.

I'm really excited to write and explore this relationship between Harry and Sadie as well. I think it will be great fun, which it one of the reasons I started the story in the first place. Hopefully you'll stick around to see it happen.

As for how Harry will deal...well, how does Harry ever deal with something? hehehehe. The way a teenage boy with a slightly higher angst level than some does.

As for them meeting...well, that's chapter four...

So glad you liked the twins and Hermione! Twins I'm used to writing, but Hermione can be tricky for me.

And yes...we have to love those twins.

Charlie's name. I wanted to find a way to tie in and give validity to my claims that Sadie's dad had been best mates with Arthur. This seemed an easy way to do it, and so far it has worked really good.

Thanks so much! Your review really did make me smile so much!

-Farmgirl


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