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Review:kristyhes says:
Hey there!! So I read your first chapter and I like it. The description is really good and the introduction with the great-gran was a good idea. Ellie's character is very interesting because you can really exploit it in many ways. Also, I think your writing style is good because from the start of the chapter to its end it was really fluid even if there are time gaps in between.

Overall I find it quite good for a first chapter. Now I'm gonna read the next one.

kristyhes(gryffiefan) ;)

Author's Response: :D I'm glad that you enjoyed the first chapter. I have a rule that I don't judge a story by its first chapter, but it definitely helps if it leaves a good impression!

I hope to exploit Ellie's character. I know what you mean by that. There are a lot issues there to mine...

Thanks so much for this wonderful review!

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