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Review:toomanycurls says:
Hi!!! I'm here with a review tag!

I kind of love the intro paragraph. It's light and covers a lot of ground. You've already got me laughing with the idea of Barty Crouch Jr. as an aspiring pastry chef.

The idea of Barty causing small fires in the kitchen is hilarious. I can imagine how Winky would have reacted. ^_^

Your assertion that he's self-aware of the HP series is quite funny (absurdly funny but I think that was the point).

Babies and algebra defeat a lot of people - not all of them dark lords. ^_^

I really like how off-the-cuff you've made Barty. He's trying to be Moody but seems a bit crazy (which probably fits into the Moody shoes quite well).

Dumbledore is hilarious and slightly off his rocker. Awesome job!

Barty's obsession with being on a cooking show and his continued rejection were all quite funny. I got a kick out of his quiche idea (and flop). You did a great job keeping the story quick and snappy while throwing him great humorous moments. ^_^

Author's Response: Hi! Haha, thank you. I have no idea where that came from, to be honest! And you're absolutely right - you don't have to be a dark lord for babies and algebra to be intimidating, lol. I'm so glad you liked the story - thanks for reading and for your lovely review!!

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