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Review:loveinidleness says:
Heylo again,

Sorry for taking so long to get around to chapter three, it wasn't I didn't want to it's just life is difficult and very much in the way. Because I took so long to get here I really wanted to give you loads of positive CC but I'm really struggling with what to say other than:

"Go and be a professional writer."

Also I don't know if you write screen and theatre plays, if you don't, you should. You have a gift for dialogue.

You've got loads of characters milling around your plot but you write each of them so distinctively, at no point is it confusing. You've not got tunnel vision about your plot, instead you're allowing your readers to really get a sense of your characters world. You blend the muggle and wizard worlds perfectly. You invent things like Wotter. You have exceptional pace and flow. You tap into things that other potter fans have long been thinking e.g. hat that can read your mind is weird, and present it in a hilarious and original way... I mean... yeh...

The only things are page break which you know, and write the sorting hat song.

I'm I don't like doing short reviews that offer not advice. All I can do is promise to keep reading and if I spot anything I will let you know, apart from that I'm taking notes from you.

Author's Response: Don't worry about how long it takes :)

*blushes* I really want to - one day, but that requires an Original Idea, which has not arrived just yet! Thank you so much, though!

I don't write screenplays actually, because they're a format with which I am not familiar, so I would not know where to begin. That you think that my dialogue is screenplay worthy, however, is quite special! Your review is making me go as red as a ripe tomato!

The Sorting Hat scares me a little, so I wanted to show why it was so creepy. Thank you about Wotter. A lot of people have been like, "Did you misspell Potter?" Which is understandable because I don't bother to explain its etymology.

The page break is necessary, but I DON'T KNOW HOW TO RHYME SO I CANNOT WRITE THE SONG! I want to, but RHYMING!

This review was very lovely! Thank you so much and I'm terribly sorry about the tardy reply!

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