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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey! I hope that your ankles ok now! Ive only ever sprained mine and I thought that was bad, but breaking it in two places sounds horrible! All the best for your recovery though :)

Yay they recovered from Dragon Pox! I wish we got to see more Sirius-ill scenes as Im sure having him ill and grumpy would have been great. The mentions towards Teddy being the happiest one with it though made me chuckle. Your characterisation in this chapter was really, really great. Sirius was my favourite with the whole not wanting Izzy to stay out late at the party because his protective side always seems ridiculous given what he did in his youth. Also, Fleur doesnt seem to be the type of person to let people run wild or anything like that.

I loved this line! Even his little Mary was growing up on him in a few hours shed be turning two and, next thing hed know, shed be bargaining curfews with him too.

All the puns and jokes in reference to George and Izzy had me cracking up, though the winner was serious again claiming that the Weasley boys would keep her away from perverts. Not that George is one, but it did give me a chance to chuckle away at his expense.

The tale about her leaving behind and the jokes about apparition all make sense now! I almost thought she had gone and kissed some other boy than because I would get the whole George being angry thing, but I much prefer this alternative because the thought of something getting in the way of George and Izzy is horrible!

A brilliant chapter and I cant wait for the next :D

-Kiana

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