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Review:marauderfan says:
Hi there! Another great chapter. From the hints at the beginning of the chapter I was hoping the people Rose and Lorcan were travelling with would be magical, so that was pretty exciting! I love how both groups of people are magical but thought the other wasn't, so neither of them could say anything out loud about it, when it turned out they were both magical! :p

I'm really looking forward to getting to know Rose and Lorcan's travel companions even more. They haven't divulged much about themselves so far, although they seem nice. But I think after they discuss how they're all wizards, maybe the other group will open up a bit more!

As for Scorpius, I've got no idea. Maybe there's a version of himself in the past as well. The only thing that confused me was whose ancestor he killed? His own? or the man's? - "You killed one of ancestors
there's a word missing in the sentence, so you might want to fix that small error :)

Lovely work - looking forward to the next update! ♥

Author's Response: Hey Kristin! Haha, I thought about not making them magical but then it's just not as fun so I thought why not? Plus, as you said, it's fun to create the confusion about whether they were or weren't.

I'm sorry you don't know much yet! I wanted to go and spill everything out, but then I figured it might be a little boring so I'm drip feeding it out so I hope you like it!

You'll soon figure out more things, chapter 11 I think? Thanks for pointing that out! I meant the man's :)

Thanks for another brilliant review! ♥

-Kiana


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