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Review:academica says:
Hey Rachel, I'm back again!

Your description in this chapter was really cool. I liked the ominous scene with the red sparks glinting through the fog and crowd of investigators. I also appreciated the care paid to describing the characters' facial expressions and how they reacted to one another in conversation; those details brought the interactions to life and made the plot in this chapter easy to follow.

Anyway, the identity of the deceased man is finally revealed! I'm very curious about why he was killed and why his name didn't show up alongside his dot on the map, as well as how this mystery is connected to the incident in the common room--unless they aren't connected at all :) I'm definitely excited about chapter four.

Great work!


Author's Response: Hi, Amanda! I'm sorry it's taken me so long to respond to this review -- I've been SO bad about that lately. But I always say I respond to every review I receive, and I do mean that, so here I am!

The red sparks outlining the body is one of my favorite parts of this chapter. ♥ For facial expressions, I just SEE those things in my head, you know? I'm really glad it's able to make the story so lifelike in turn; that's something that's major to me in a story, as I'm sure I've mentioned at some point in our acquaintance. :P

More about Bartleby Cuffe and his death will of course be revealed... it just might take a while. ;) Chapter 4's taken me much longer than normal, but I also wanted to take this story at a more relaxed pace, so it's not necessarily a bad thing.

Anyway! Thank you for reviewing! ♥ I'm really, really glad you did!

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