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Review:toomanycurls says:
I read the upcoming chapter summaries and realized that you're going to focus on Remus. That makes me super happy that he's focus in the narrative.

You captured the environment of young boys in a dorm really well. The excitement and energy that James, Peter, and Sirius had was great. I really loved having Remus trying to get to sleep (he's kind of an old man :P).

Remus' assumption that McGonagall would be repulsed by him really broke my heart. :( I just wanted to hug Remus. The password of chocoballs made me laugh - most of Dumbledore's passwords make me laugh actually. Remus' nervousness and anxiety in his interview with Dumbledore was really well done. I can imagine he felt like he was there by accident and was scared that he'd have to go home. I felt for Remus when he panicked about too many people finding out about his lycanthropy. I do like that Remus second guessed Dumbledore about his plans (just because he's so careful). I love how responsible he is too.

I really liked Lily's awe at the magic of Hogwarts. It's cute. ^_^

You've characterized the kids very well. Sirius seems like the little ladiez man already and poor Peter is teased quite a bit. I like that their patterns started early in their relationships.

Are you secretly a Lily/Remus shipper? ^_^ She *is* paying a lot of attention to him. Aww, the post coming was so sweet and sad. I like that James got a letter and Sirius' bit of sadness at his mum not missing him. It's really awesome that James is pretty accepting of Remus even though Sirius is a bit indifferent. His eagerness at sneaking out with him next time was incredible.

It's absolutely perfect that James was so good at transfiguration (not surprising just glad to see it).

ahahaha, of course McGonagall knows they let off the dung bomb. Okay, so she had a snitch. I can't wait to see how they get back at Narcissa!!

Author's Response: Oh yes, Remus will be the focus of quite a few chapters in this first year :) I'm glad that makes you happy!

Haha, Remus does seem like an old man at the moment, and a bit of a hermit! That will all change though ;)

Aw, I know, poor Remus :( how could anyone be repulsed by him?! He has some huge issues that he has to resolve - i think having a few friends may help with that ;) I'm glad you felt Remus's anxiety and nervousness was done well. I just felt that he would have been waiting for something to go wrong, for Dumbledore to say he'd made a mistake and Remus had to leave. I'm also glad you liked how responsible he was and how he questioned Dumbledore. I think he would always have been the responsible, careful man we see him as in the books. Well, not always, as you'll see later on ;)

Haha, Lily's awe of Hogwarts is just as I'd be if I went there (and a bit like I was when I went on the Potter studio tour ;)) I think she would have been quite amazed by it all. Pleased you thought it was cute!

Ah, I didn't mean for Sirius to be potrayed as a young ladies man - he will have a love interest (many chapters down the line) but he will not be the cliche heart breaker ;) And yes, Peter is teased quite a bit to start with but he soon becomes more of an equal with the others ;) I'm really pleased you think they are characterised well!

Aha, no I'm not a secret Lily/Remus shipper... But I could see the pairing being possible ;) She is paying him a lot of attention but in a friendly way, she feels a bit of an affinity for him after their meeting in diagon alley!

I'm glad you liked that James was good at Transfiguration - of course he had to be haha!

Haha, I had to have McGonagall find out about the dung bombs - they needed to be in detention on Friday ;) This certainly won't be the only time they're in trouble! Ah, yes the revenge on Narcissa, I've not quite decided how or when that'll happen - but it will!

Thankyou so much for another incredible review, Rose :)

Haronione ♥


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