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Review:Rumpelstiltskin says:
Ah, so this is interesting.

The imagery is extremely vivid, enabling a brilliant connection to the readers. It causes empathy between reader and character. The descriptions are positively beautiful, enough so that the reader can flawlessly put themselves in Blanc's position.

I find the plot to be particularly intriguing. The cataclysmic story of her imprisonments and this "Holy Grail" left me begging for more. It's unique and haunting and I just love it!

The characterization is also very well-developed and interesting.

Some of the terms that you have used are also quite brilliant. They seem to jump right out at me. (EG: "beautifully tragic" in chapter 1; "heart of the manor" in chapter 2; "the pain remained...Hogwarts Express" ; and "mimic his fortitude" in chapter 5)

There is a few (very scarce) typos that I noticed but nothing that jarred the flow of the story at all!

I really like this a bunch!

-Rumpel

Author's Response: Wow thank you so much for such a lovely review! It really gave me the confidence I needed to continue this story!

I'm honestly so pleased to know what you think and it's extremely touching that you would read and review the whole story and Look out for certain quotes in each chapter!

I'm definitely going to be looking for a BETA reader for those pesky typo's so hopefully that will all be sorted out soon!

Once again, thank you so much for such a nice review!


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