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Review:toomanycurls says:
This is an interesting premise for a story. There are a few ideas that surprised me. I didn't think wizards would use cell phones (but if they're in a non-wizard area I could see them working). Cell phones were rather new in 1999/2000. Though, I can get past that as it's pretty important in the chapter. ^_^

I like how you have a brief catch up on where main characters are in their lives. Parts of it (especially the bit about George) felt a little rushed. A touch more detail what made Kingsley the best minister or how Ron proposed would add a great layer of depth.

Your narrative voice in this chapter is quite interesting and unique.

It's interesting how Hermione finds out about Ron's cheating. It's a bit heartbreaking how Ron talks about her in his texts with Lavender. :( I'm interested to see how Hermione confronts him.

Author's Response: Why thank you and I'm glad you like it!!! :D

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