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Review:Illuminate says:
Hi! Review Tag!

This is a really cute oneshot! Teddy and Dominique are a really cute couple, especially in this story! Usually fluff isn't really my bag, I have to be in a certain mood for it, but this isn't so fluffy that it gives me a cavity xD It's just adorable, and it feels like a new beginning with the pair of them.

I also like that it references Teddy's past relationship with Victoire- it keeps the story in canon, which is one of the top priorities for me in a non-AU story xD

I think I may have seen a few missing commas here and there which made some sentences feel out-of-breath, but other than that it was fine grammar wise :)

Good job!

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reading and reviewing.

I am glad you liked this oneshot and enjoyed Teddy/Dominique. Fluff is usually not my thing either but when the plot bunny hit me I didn't have a choice xP I am pleased you found it adorable as that was my intention.

Yeah, I tried to keep it as canon as possible, and let's face it, not all high school relationships work out, and so it didn't for Teddy/Vic either.

I'll do a re-read and try to spot the missing commas. Thanks!


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