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Review:Illuminate says:
Hi! Ravenclaw Review Tag!

This story continues to be very funny and very well written! xD I instantly disliked Michael because he's so vain and self-centred, but I thought the fact he was willing to go along with Lavander's plan was so hilarious I simply cannot wait to see what the two of them get up to. You wtite Michael so well to establish him as an unlikeable character but then turn that around as a way to possibly make the readers laugh at him rather than hate him.

Lavender is written well too, her craziness and hyperactiveness comes right out of the books, and her plan is so funny, especially since we haven't even seen Ron and Hermione yet! I'm interested to see how they react to all of this.

Great job!

Author's Response: Hi again! I'm glad that you chose Snapshots again as I do have a soft spot for it :P

Haha, I loved writing Michael as you could make him do anything really and it somehow made sense in this distorted world. Yay for not hating on him, he's just Lockhart really vain but not evil :P

They don't feature in this story, but they probably would be angry at her! Thanks for this great review :D

-Kiana


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