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Review:adluvshp says:
Hey! Here for review tag.

This was another interesting chapter and it was amusing to read Millie and Sirius' interactions, and the way their friends dealt with it. I giggled out loud at Millie's "sleeping in class" technique. I wish I had that "talent" haha.

Next chapter is the Quidditch match so I am definitely excited to see how it turns out.

All in all, this was a fun chapter, and I enjoyed it. The only little CC I'd give you is to work on the flow of your chapters a little. The transition from one scene to another seem a little abrupt at times. Apart from that, it's all good =)

Cheers!
AD
(AditiDraco95)

Author's Response: Hello!

Haha, yeah. I wish I could sleep that way in class as well!

This entire story needs some massive editing, so I'll keep the flow issue in mind. I know what you mean, though.

Thanks for reviewing!


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