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Review:toomanycurls says:
I really like the premise of this story. Two sisters and one man always lead to trouble.

The flashback you start with is really well done. I felt quite swept up in the romantic feels you were laying down. You did a great job laying out the relationships and backgrounds with just a few key sentences.

The way you describe the pain of just being the infatuation was quite moving. It is a bit interesting that she only sees her own culpability in the relationship rather than looking at it as both sides being in the wrong.

...Teddy is surprised she's breaking things off? He should be planning on breaking things off as he's getting engaged!! And his bit about not being able to choose is ridiculous (though I'm sure you wrote it like that on purpose).

I am glad Dom stood her ground though it does seem open for a further relationship (in the romantic sense).

This is quite well done!!

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you for reading and reviewing.

I am glad you like the premise - I always find this kind of love triangle situation interesting too.

The flashback was a bit tricky to write so it's good to know you liked it and could feel the romance. I tried my best to explain the background so glad that worked.

Teddy is a jerk here, what can I say xP

Well, I have left that up to readers' interpretation whether or not there's a chance of future relationship, but don't think it will work. (you should check out the sequel hehe) XD

Thank you.


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