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Review:Sam says:
Like it so far, but it is a bit odd that a main character is only ever referred to by his surname. I mean from the perspective of a student who wasn't all that close to him fine, but not when he and his lover are the main characters. Sorry, I nit pick. So many fan fiction authors do this with Severus Snape cause through all 7 books he was referred to that way, so thats how we think of him. Just seems a bit impersonal when he is a primay character. Pet peeve of mine, just ignore me, lol

Author's Response: I'm not going to ignore you!!! Thanks for the nitpick. I admit, it is a bit awkward. For some reason it's more awkward for me to refer to him as "Severus." Not sure why, but maybe you're right, it's time to change it up and get over my awkwardness

The third story is going to change POV's anyway, from Snape's POV to more of an omniscient POV, so maybe this is the time to make the change.

Thanks for the feedback!

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