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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
Jami! *hides* I've taken ages to get back to this.. But I haven't forgotten about it dear! I've just been super busy and stuff. I will try to finish this before there are massive amounts of chapters updated for ADD though.. *sigh* I know, I'm so slow.. but on the bright side,I'm a third done of this (if I did my math correctly.. no school today so not in the mood for calculations lol)

Can I please hug Belle? Please? She deserves it, so much. I just feel so bad for her. To have your own family not support you through that is painful, but she was forcefully fed that potion and that's just cruel and not fair at all. She should've gotten a choice. That was not fair. You made it so believable and didn't really glorify the whole concept of pregnancy. My heart is aching because I feel so bad and just disgusted at her family and that idiot Christophe.

I knew it. Alrek. UGH. The thing is, now that I know Alrek is a Death Eater, Lily and the Marauders don't. If he does something to them... I will forever hate him. Just.. stay away. It'll hurt even more as a reader, seeing him do mean stuff in the future, because I'd just be screaming at the characters, "Don't listen to him!" but..

They won't be able to hear me :(

Going back up a bit earlier in this chapter, the way you do Bella is scary. So scary. Because it's perfection the way you pull her off. Regulus' bit was very interesting also. I'm a bit proud of him, that even though he's a Death Eater, and Sirius hates his guts, Regulus doesn't want to hurt him. It makes me think of what they could have had... And that's just very sad :(

Anyways, a flawless chapter Jami. This has been my favourite so far.

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