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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Review number four! :D

This was really cute! I really enjoyed the fact that it started out sort of cliche, with a girl falling for a guy that she doesn't even know, and then BAM! She doesn't get the guy she originally wants. She gets someone a lot better.

It all happened a bit quickly, but that's the point of the House Cup challenge! You write what you can, and if it happens to wrap up too quickly, that's just more chagrin for your readers. ;)

I am incredibly happy to know that you're writing a sequel to this. I think it's an idea that needs to be expounded upon. How long will it be? I think that it should definitely be longer than a one-shot. I'm envisioning the finished product as a short story, because it's cool to explore a relationship between two people in a short period of time. But that's really your secret. :)

Your characters were likable and really, who DOESN'T identify with Tibbie every now and then?! I thought that Elbow Patch was quite a jerk, and Henry the Scotch Bonnet was a super cute guy who doesn't really know that he's cute. (That's the best kind.)

This was great! I can't wait for the sequel.

~UnluckyStar57

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