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Review:Rumpelstiltskin says:
This is beautiful.

As I was reading it, I kept asking myself "Why are there no reviews on this?!", so allow me to be your first.

Not only did this story make me laugh so hard I nearly cried, it brought on some very strong emotions. It's sometimes hard to find a story to connect with that can evoke emotions quite like this. That's one of the things that I especially like about this.

I especially enjoyed the end. This is a prime example of an M-rated love scene. The fine line and vague regulations surrounding them can hinder writer's abilities to create love scenes. But you! You've captured it!

Lacey's character is well-developed as well. That's something that really strikes me because I love a good OC to mix things up a bit!

Overall, I am genuinely impressed!

-Rumpel

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for all the wonderful compliments! It's good to hear that you laughed because that really was the whole point. I tried to be real careful with the love scene as well, and its nice to hear my care paid off. It means a lot so thank you for taking the time to review!

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