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Review:Ardeith says:
First thanks so much for the warm welcome back! I know just what you mean, I have some vanished Internet friends that I sometimes wonder about. I'm sure they just got busy and had other things to do vs. this site, but...

Anyway, on to the review. I loved this chapter. In the midst of dark times and a dark story, it was so nice to revisit Hogwarts and see students with nothing more important to worry about than their next exam. And it was nice to see Sirius and James be their relatively silly Marauder persona again. I love the glimpse of their fanboy, Toby. :-) What was Toby's nickname that he wasn't allowed to use?

So now they know where the memories are, right? Though I'm afraid their behavior must have seemed awfully suspicious to Dumbledore.

The moral dilemma hurts my mind too. I just want Sneth back together. Tell James not to worry about it! ;-)

Author's Response: I've had several Internet friends disappear without a trace over the years -- it's a very scary thing. I'm just glad to know that you're okay! ♥

I did try (as I'm sure I've mentioned before) to balance the general darkness of the story with lighter chapters like this one, and it was too fun writing jokey Sirius and James to resist. :) And Toby! I don't know where he came from, but I love him. I actually don't have a clue as to what his nickname was, but you can be sure it was something that would have irked Sirius to no end.

They do know where the memories are! And yes, Dumbledore definitely noticed their suspicious behavior, even if he didn't mention it outright... All shall be revealed in time!

Thank you for taking the time to review! ♥


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