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Review:APerkins says:
!!! I love this story! I think you did Luna quite well, she is so hard to get inside the head of! She is just enough quirky to be believable without being cringe worthy or fake.

And honestly, I don't think you left it in an odd place at all. That seemed like a really good place to end it, and appropriate to Luna as well.
I really liked the way you portrayed mortimer - he is sooo awkward! I really like that Luna held no judgement to him in his weirdness, she jsut kinda accepted who and what he was.

Now I find the idea of Luna behind a cash register terrifying, and as we never saw her in Care of Magical creatures, I had always assumed that she would NOT be very good with real animals (as opposed to fake.imaginary ones), despite the fact that she does go onto become a naturalist. I can only imagine how long she will keep her job!

Well done!

Author's Response: Eeep, thanks! I'm so glad you think I did Luna justice - that means a lot to me because, you're right, she is so hard to write! (That rhymed!)

Haha, it is a kind of scary idea, isn't it? :P I would imagine she didn't stay long at the cash register! She'd probably be good with the animals though - she was great with Thestrals, after all.

Thanks for your review! ♥♥

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