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Review:APerkins says:
I love Quidditch!!! And I love the way Lily isnt interested in James, but she so is.I really like the way you portray the marauders, have I told you that. James is so loveable and so annoying all at the same time. silly prat. Loved that he flew into a tree.

Oh, and the line that ended: lot of feathers in the air and a lot of reparo! what a beautiful sentence! It just made me happy!

I was fairly happy with the way the make up convo went too - they are always so awkward those conversations, and I think you did quite well in that.

I am a little surprised, but not much, that Mel didnt take offence to the fact that he would date her if she wasnt slytherin. I guess if she isnt that interested yet (or way too far into denial territory) that type of thing isnt a big deal for her and more just a part of her teasing?

Anyway, still loving it! Write more!

Author's Response: That means SO much to me that you like the way I write the Marauders. It's always a struggle to write canon characters because I want them to be the same characters JKR wrote, you know? And obviously the Marauders are pretty crucial to the plot of this story lol. So I'm really glad you like their characterisation!

Mel doesn't really think of Sirius that way, so she's not offended. Maybe she would be if she liked him though ;)

Your reviews were wonderful - thank you so much!!! I will be posting the next chapter soon :)


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