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Review:1917farmgirl says:
Okay, I can tell already that I'm going to be hooked on this story.

You have such a GIFT of creating characters! They are vibrant and real and jump right off the page and grab you!

And yet, you can turn around and do the same thing with your canon characters! So amazing!

There were so many things I loved about this chapter - I will try to remember them all. So here comes my fangirl list:

- Love the myths perpetuated by older siblings about Hogwarts. "Risky Swimming" hehehehe. Made me laugh.
- Loved the line about how there were a lot of pushy red-heads running around the train.
- The names you use are great! So off the wall sometimes, but so JKR!
- The image of Fred or George (which ever one it was) calmly shutting a first year girl in a compartment, and her screaming her head off...too funny.
- Your powers of description are astounding! I could see everything, hear it, feel it... WOW
- I really loved Hollis' family you created, from her parents to Gram to the cat that refused to be stuffed into a crate. :)

Once again, thanks so much for a wonderful chapter! Must sleep now, but as soon as I can, I'll be back to find out more about Hollis and Fred!

Oh, and I do believe that you deserve an Honorary Membership in my Include More Fred and George in Fanfic Support Group. Here, have a welcome cookie.

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