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Review:1917farmgirl says:
Wow, this is a most unusual start to a story! At first I was inclined to be a little skeptical - inventing an entire country and making your protagonist the ruler of it seemed a little far-fetched to me. But then I reminded myself that this was a story for a world where people flew around on brooms, kept three-headed dogs locked up in schools, and used birds to deliver mail... It didn't seem so far-fetched after that and I decided what the heck, give it a go.

Glad I did.

This is intriguing! And your character is very original, despite all the things that could have worked against her!

And I really like that the magic is being introduced into the story through her sister, not her. Great twist!

Really nice start. Keep it up! Can't wait to see how you bring George into this.

Author's Response: Hi!
Well, to be honest, I'm glad you did start reading it, but I understand the initial skepticism.
But yay! My character is original!
As for the introduction of magic, I wanted to just drop Carolyn into the magic world as she was (a hot-headed teenager who knew nothing about the wizarding war or (excuse my language), Fred's death.
So the 'my sister is magic is not me' was really just for that, but I'm glad it's a nice twist.
Thank you so much!
MT


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