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Review:1917farmgirl says:
Okay, I've been trying to get started reading this great story for three days now and I am FINALLY getting done with the first chapter. No, that's not because it was hard to get into your writing or your story, but because people kept interrupting me! Silly people! Can't they tell I'm busy with important things?

So, I'm in love with this story already. Fred and George are by far my most favorite characters, but I don't read a lot of stories about them because usually they are out of character, or romances with cardboard-cutout girls. This is neither!

Fred is spot on so far, and if you've nailed him, I'm sure you'll nail George as well. I absolutely loved every line he spoke, action he did. I think I almost lost it when Fred called Madam Pince "Irma." That was classic. Please keep giving me more Fred like this!

And Hollis! What a great OC, and I've only just met her! I admire your guts to tell the story in first person. That can be really hard, and almost leave you feeling exposed. Of course, you are a brilliant author, one of the HPFF legends, so why wouldn't you be able to pull it off?

I'm not jealous of your talent, or your ability to write the twins, or believable, real OC's. No, not at all! Why would you think that? (Tries to cover up the green creeping up her soul, LOL>)

I can't wait to see how this goes! I'm especially intrigued by the fact that your chapters don't seem to be going in chronological order. Will have to see how this works!

Oh, and just so you know, I'm kind of a slow reader. If you don't see another review from me right away, it doesn't mean I'm not still reading. It just means those PEOPLE keep interrupting!

BRAVO! Thanks so much for sharing!

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