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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
And here's number three! (Several weeks later, of course!)

I LOVED this. You're REALLY good at examining George's life after Fred's death, it seems, and the language you used in this was marvelous. Of course, I thought it was interesting that you used a quote from a Regina Spektor song, but it was absolutely perfect for this story! I've never heard of "Jessica." I'll have to look it up!

Some lines that I really loved:

"Christmas had passed like a trudging giant, shattering barely healed hearts."

"February had no colour; it was simply a passing shadow, something that must be gotten over with."

"“Fred, wake up now, we must get older, oh please wake up” And he couldn’t stop the flow of the tears, they fell down his face like a release of the loneliness that had infected his bones."

You are fabulous at simile and metaphor. The ones that I saw were different and intriguing. Great comparisons!!!

'Til next time!

~UnluckyStar57

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