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Review:Illuminate says:
Hi! Review Tag!

This is a nice start to the story! It's nice that you suggest that Draco does have the softer side to him and that comes out a little in this chapter. You write Hermione very well, she seems very authentically written. I also like that you set the story in this time period, when both Hermione and Draco are vulnerable.

I saw a few little typos that could be fixed with a beta or a few read-throughs, but other than that this is an enjoyable read :)

Great job!

Author's Response: Hi!

I am so pleased you like the edits, something tells me that if you'd had read this prior to the major edits I made a couple of days ago, you wouldn't be saying that :P Trust me, looking back I see sooo many plot holes. It's good though knowing I made a smart move and edited some out before someone else began reading!

Agh, typos. I'll be sure to go back and comb through this again!

Thanks for stopping by m'dear!


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