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Review:Mathilde says:
Hello there! I don't read this website as often as I did in the past years, so I don't usually drop a review but WOW!! Your story is magnificient! It's not easy to depict an OC so well, but you did it! Verity is a fascinating little thing, your characterization of her is perfect! I particoularly like the fact that she is just a step away from darkness and that she is just beginning to appreciate how horrible the world that surrounds her is (or is soon to become). You left me wondering about what she is going to do when the Death Eaters will use the shop to get to Hogwarts, but maybe your story won't go that far in the future? Another thing that I liked is the fact that George is not at all prejudiced against her because of her work but on the contrary he likes her immediately; anyway I like so many things about this story that I will not list them all, I will simply say that I love everything about it!
I really hope to read another chapter soon!
Mathilde

Author's Response: Hi! I feel I first need to say this review was such a lovely surprise and it really made my day. I'm so honoured you're enjoying my story, and even described it as magnificent! :) Thank you!

I'm very pleased that you enjoy Verity, I love writing her and feel her character and voice is very unique. I really wanted her to be sort of inbetween the binaries of good and evil: she's just working at the shop because she's good at it and enjoys it, not to pick any particular side. I'm glad you're liking George as well, and how he's interested in her and not prejudiced. They're such a fun pair to write about.

The next chapter just got validated today, and I hope you enjoy it! Thank you again so much for this incredible review! :)


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