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Review:patronus_charm says:
Wow I'm so glad that I decided to read this story as it was truly fantastic! Also sorry for reviewing bombing you here I just couldn't resist such an amazing story with an excellent final chapter in the way it ties things up.

I have to admit I was only a little too glad to see that Vladimir finally got his comeuppance with being arrested like that. It was nice to see that they were compassionate enough to do that and not kill him straight away and I might have to be tempted into reading Their Finest Hour to find out what happens next. One thing which stood out to me was how he noted he worked with Riddle which must have been so different to how he saw it.

Seeing the early formation of the Death Eaters was so eerie too and Riddle's gradual transformation during this story really was great. The way you tied in Albania to this story was really interesting because I had always wondered whether he felt a pull there for a reason other than the Diadem and it was nice to see your own head canon of it.

I'm glad that Augustus and Anastasia proved me wrong! I hated thinking that they might betray the others at any moment so to see that they've banded together against Riddle was nice. I liked how you showed that even though your loyalty to your country is great the one against evil is even greater and it was such a brilliant and subtle touch.

The final scene was simply great. We got to see more of Moody and Duncan's wonderful team work which I enjoyed throughout the story and then Anastasia weaving her way into Duncan's life to make canon events possible. You just managed to wind up events in a seamless way which is something I look for in a good ending.

This was such a wonderful and unique story and I loved every minute of it! A fantastic read :D

-Kiana

Author's Response: So I wanted this chapter to function as sort of a montage at the end of a movie that answers the remaining questions and ties up the loose ends.

Riddle basically saw Vladimir as a means to an end, and it didn't end well for the latter. He certainly won't be the last to get duped by Riddle.

When Duncan first appeared in my other story, I just tried to give him a typical Scottish name, but a couple reviewers asked if he was Mary MacDonald's dad, so I just decided to go with it. Pretty coincidental that it ended up that way haha.

Thank you very much for the excellent reviews you've left. It was a tremendous help, especially being the first to review the later chapters. Au revoir for now!

-James


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