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Review:patronus_charm says:
The tension at the beginning of this chapter was brilliant! I was caught up in the confusion and the tension so much that I had to go and re-read the section again so not to miss anything. I thought you handled that really well and painted such a vivid scene of what was happening before me that it made me start yelling out the plan to my laptop which of course didn't respond. :P I thought it fitted excellently with the theme of espionage and how though you plan and plan it sometimes just doesn't work out.

Dumbledore and Karakoff being there showed excellently how past grievances are put away in the future for the sake of diplomatic ties. Another minor point before the main one I really liked all the little mentions of the Trade Fair and Dumbledore's speech it was just brilliant and added such an authentic air.

Duncan had really grown on me in this story so to see what happened at the end of the section was rather heart-breaking. I think the thing which is just so excellent about this story is how the air of fear and the unknown is maintained perfectly throughout showing me exactly what the Cold War was like. Seeing it from this perspective has only heightened my interest in this era!

Wow that ending! (I seem to be saying it a lot in this story!) I never anticipated the twist the Albatross being triggered but I really loved it! Then the way Anastasia just threw Antonin to the wolves by allowing him to drown like that. Or if we're going along Canon lines not drown. Either way I can't wait to read on. :D

-Kiana

Author's Response: Thank you so much for being the first to review the ending! I was really anxious to see how readers would react to it, and I was worried it might be a bit confusing.

Hopefully this tied up the loose ends, and there may be a few surprises in the next chapter...



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