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Review:patronus_charm says:
This chapter was simply brilliant in terms of plot development with so much happening! I really liked the split scenes and POV's as it really added to the pace and the suspense of the chapter.

I'm glad we got a greater focus on Anastasia here as you know by now she's my favourite character. Her malicious air of victory in this chapter was great with the way she was rejoicing in the way Marie never recognised her. Then later on with the detail about her wanting to be a skater and playing with their ideas like that was really original and added a lot.

One aspect of the plot which I forgot to comment on before was the one with Quincy. It really is interesting and terrifying to see how much power he can wield and knowing what he discovered could lead to. I dread to even what a wizard version of a Hiroshma scale disaster could do for everything so let's hope this story stays true to the Cold War narrative and no bombs are set off.

The ending was fantastic! A really well-written action scene which is hard to come across. I do wonder what the effect those pills will have on Moody and I hope we find out soon.

Great chapter :D

-Kiana

Author's Response: This is one of the chapters I was most worried about, so thanks a lot for being the first to review it!

I wanted to go a bit deeper into Anastasia's character here, and who knows, maybe there was more truth than we realize in that backstory.

As for the part with Quincy, I was pretty much trying to come up with a magic equivalent of nuclear weapons to have that kind of tension in the background (and also to make the James Bond reference of having a Q name)

Thanks again!


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