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Review:patronus_charm says:
This chapter and the previous were possible my favourites!

I almost wanted the whole Anastasia/Natalie drama to be true and couldn't help but fall for it a little at first. I think it's the whole idea of them repenting and going to the good side like Snape did is a little to addictive. One thing I have to admire is how you chose a female to have such a prominent role. It saddens me to see this happens so rarely in action stories but the fact she's the instigator of a lot of the trouble in this story is wonderful and admire the change you made.

I do have to wonder what will happen to her though. As she's not mentioned in the HP books it does make me wonder whether she'll be killed or not or if she simply slips away. Hmm, either seem likely at the moment.

I have to pity Duncan and Moody though, they just simply don't know. With having read the rest of the chapter, I can only fear the worst for Duncan because I assume that Anastasia will get to the bottom of his secret. Excellent
suspense though!

Call me paranoid, but ever since I heard that Augustus was a Slytherin I have a feeling he might be a turn coat. Yes, you may just be setting an example by making him a good one, but I just can't know. I'll just have to watch and wait.

An amazing chapter :D


Author's Response: So I hope it didn't get too confusing there with the whole double/double agent thing!

Oh yes, that's always the downside of non-canon OC's, although the good thing here is that we still have 40 years to go until the canon era, so there is some room to work with.

As for Augustus, we'll just see haha

Thanks again for the great reviews!

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