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Review:patronus_charm says:
I really loved this chapter!

Anastasia is the best in characterisation terms, in my opinion. She does contains something which draws me and wants to watch her and what she does because I never really predict it. Though she shares some similarities with Bellatrix by both possessing what I just mentioned, there seems to be something more humane about her as I picked up with her nerves when she realised the Brits had been there. It will be interesting to watch her later on.

Duncan and Moody are an unexpectedly great double act. They both bounce off one another and make for great action scenes!

Ah, this book is like a culmination of all the best Bond films! I think the thing which did it for me was the secret calling thing when it led to something else because that just showed how effective espionage could be in its simplest form. You're making me want to write my own spy fic now!

Riddle's really intriguing me here. He's evil but not as he usually is depicted. I guess it's because he hasn't yet assumed the role of the leader yet despite the earlier Death Eaters circling around him. He's another one I can't wait to see transform!

-Kiana

Author's Response: The first few chapters I kind of needed to set some things up, and now the action is finally starting, so it should be fun from here on out!

I'm really glad you like Anastasia, I was trying to make her into a "bad guy" but also somebody you could root for in a way.

This period in Riddle's life is pretty unknown in canon, so I'm pretty interested in his origin story.

Thanks again for the review!


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