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Review:patronus_charm says:
Just a short review here!

I really loved the power hierarchy here. It seems as if Lenin could have been Grindelwald and Stalin could have been Riddle with each one usurping the one who started the whole chain of evilness off.

Your characterisation here was brilliant! Each one is so unique and the blend of all things magic and muggle is truly brilliant. At the moment young Moody seems to be a favourite with the way he's willing to work without pay as that reminds me a lot of he's older self and dedication to his work. I never expected Dumbledore to pop either so that was a happy surprise!

Ooh one last thing. The way you constantly Moscow to the Sovit-ness, Scots to the drinking (;)) and the English to things like MI5 and Oxford is a great play of stereotypes it sort of grounds the reader by providing them with something familiar despite the changing air.

Awesome chapter!

-Kiana

Author's Response: Hey again! The dark wizards really do seem to have a lot of parallels with real life dictators, and I was trying to portray that a bit.

I really enjoyed writing Moody's character; we know so little about his backstory so there's a lot of room to work with.

Thanks again for another great review!


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