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Review:patronus_charm says:
I keep on seeing this story pop up at TGS so I couldnít resist coming along! With my mum seeing the Berlin Wall fall (luckily, she was on the west side!) and loving this era, I canít wait to see where this story goes!

Your description really stood out to me in this chapter with it being so poignant and adding so much to the scene rather than taking away from it. It was a perfect addition to the action scenes which I have to see Iím glad that you included in the first chapter as itís nice to start with a bang.

The mixture of all things magical with the surroundings of Russia was brilliant because I know how horrible the winters are there! It really added a sense of uniqueness and individuality and just general care for all those extra details so kudos for including that.

The mentions towards Grindelwald and Dolohov were brilliant and I never connected them to the Cold War before, but now it makes sense. Grindelwald could have been from east Germany for all we know and Dolohov could have been from Eastern Europe with that name so, again, that care for details meant it was a brilliant addition to the story.

Iím sorry this review is rather brief I just canít wait to read on!

-Kiana

Author's Response: Thanks a lot for reading. I'm really interested in this era, and I bet your mom must have some amazing stories!

I've never been to Russia, but I can only imagine how harsh the winters actually are, and I thought that kind of went with the overall tone of the story.

In many ways the HP world seems to mirror our world, and the Death Eaters seem to have an Eastern European connection with the likes of Dolohov and Karkaroff, so I wanted to take that and run with it.

Thanks a lot for the review!!


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