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Review:kristyhes says:
Yo yo yo!!! Hi there so first of all let me tell you that you're an AMAZING WRITER. I love how you write about your characters in a loopy kind of way..if you knw what I mean.. Well it's 2 a.m here and I just finished reading your story-well til this chappie and I absolutely loved it. Your characters are great and I'm really fond of Ella 'cause she kind of is the type of girl I wanna be-you knw to actually be able to talk to guys like her. And my favourite among the boys is definitely Finn. You see he reminds me of my cousin whose name is Nick by the way-if you wanted to know.

SO BACK TO THE STORY!! I think I'm gonna answer your questions..

~ So about the interrogation, it was really funny and I was trying to imagine this scene and let me tell you that in my head it was like Ella was in a dark room and the boys were circling around her (like you wrote it and then I imagined them turning into wolves so I reverted to reading the chapter). Ella's reaction was hilarious especially her comment about the werewolves "Full moon and everything. Great for the werewolf community." I laughed out loud at this point and my sister was looking at me like I had grown another head. And there was nothing that I disliked :)

~Now my thoughts on Chase and Ella. Well ket me tell you straight that I'm not really a fan of those two together. Chase seems to be a great guy but...i don't know after reading this chapter he seems to be too good to be true. I think there's something that he's hiding.

~ Hmm I personally think that Hogwarts would be boring without Filch 'cause seriously, who would be the students prank victim apart from him??

~ Hmm I've never been cold and stuck on a broomstick in my whole live but I think that the first thing that would be hard to do is to maybe move?

~ I definitely love my grandma's homemade corn chicken soup. Whenever I go to her place especially during winter holidays, she cooks that specialty of hers. And let me tell you-IT'S ABSOLUTELY DELICIOUS!!

So now that I answered all tour questions I think that it's time for me to go. I really hope that you'll update soon!! So until next time,

Toodles (~.^)
-> kristyhes

Author's Response: awh thanks for the review! i love hearing what you have to say! in response to some of the things you said...ME. FREAKING. TOO. i literally started this writing process by thinking "hm, what would the best perfect version of myself be like? hmmm. someone who is not awkward, knows boys who aren't her cousins, can play sports involving hand-eye coordination..." and so on. Hi, Nick! Do you like robot potatoes? Finn's one of my favorites too.
I'm ever so pleased that you find my weirdness funny and not concerning! and thanks for answering my peculiar questions- you totally didn't need too. i kind of forget what they are actually...
Most of ch 12 is up! i'm going to try finishing it up tonight :)
keep reading!
xoxo Jilly

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